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scent

you smelled of sweet, freshly laundered clothes; clean and innocent.

i saw you standing there near the glass panels waiting for me. your hair was the usual unkempt, pointing-to-ten-different-directions style that you usually had. that was the first time i saw you then. you had a ready smile. your puppy eyes too darn beautiful to resist. then we went inside.

imagine a family size pizza that's good for two. yeah, we ate it all. drawing silent and secret deep breaths to calm the excitement, i was able to get a whiff of your scent.

you smelled of sweet, freshly laundered clothes; clean and innocent.

a few nights later, i was able to slowly undress you; peeling away at the pieces of cloth that frame your brown body. with your muffled moans, my pale fingers traced fine lines on your shivering skin.

suddenly there was wild fire on your once innocent eyes. sweat and musk, your body was aflame. and the heat was contagious. i made furious and tender love to you.

you, lying there languorously recovering from post-ejaculatory triste, with the smell of sex emanating from the sweet secret places of your body...

while your sweet, freshly laundered clothes, clean and innocent, were everywhere on the floor.
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found and lost, found, and then lost again. this is for you, whose footprints can never be washed away by the tide.

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:icondamnedlostsoul:
i had high respect for you and your writing even before i read your work. i never thought that you were this good. :)

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in the midst of a thousand drops of red, a howl was heard from his beaten wrists...

insanity has set in...

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:iconjeub:
coming from you, that's a lot.

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Convulsions. Convolutions
moments when life describes metaphors
:iconklit-shy:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME. :heart:
arousing opening
lingering finale.

you are my dumbfound.

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i write. this is what i want.
and sometimes i write lyrics for boy bands.
:iconrakistangnars:
he is! he is!

(beb, he's my god :P)

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:iconrakistangnars:
hah! it's time the whole dA community go gaga over your words as i have been (and still am) since 2004 :P

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your ordinary girl ATTRACTS men. i BEWILDER them. that's the BIG difference :)

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:iconjeub:
fan girl. haha.

oh, not that i'm complaining in any way. :boogie:

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Convulsions. Convolutions
moments when life describes metaphors
:iconrakistangnars:
proof that you've spent years in dA: you do know how to use smileys, haha ^^

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